Getting together:
You could call it a party. Foreigners, strangers, does not matter. We are chatting about events in our lives.
I see my colleague. Wincing with pain, I grip her arm. She smiles.
Only if everyone could keep quiet, they would hear me shouting. After all, buried alive by debris is a bad way to die.
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On to the real stuff:
"Teenagers should not be allowed to play computer games"
The probable answer is NO WAY. I mean a teenager not liking to play computer games, what are the chances. Altough computer games have their bad points, but the term responsibility is very important. I play computer games too, but not everyday. You must have self discipline, even during the freer holidays and stop yourself from playing hours on and on. Having this statement is like this argument:
"Want to go to place A?"
"Yes, but going there is difficult, you see... blah blah blah... are you sure you have the time?"
"fine, then we dont go."
" But I want to go to place A."
"Then we'll go."
"But its so difficult."
"Then we wont go altogether."
Computer games may be similar to this. As computer games have many bad points (which adults always LOVE to emphasize) it would be better to just not play them altogether. Like I said, responsibility is important. You have responsibility to stop playing at a certain time (eg midnight) then your parents will definitely allow you to play.
Well to my opinion, not all teenagers do not have self discipline or responsibility (double negatives) so not all teenagers should not be stopped from playing computer games. I believe I have enough responsibility to play computer games (teehee) and unlike somebody, do not spam videos like Arby n the ch33f (ignore that).
Gah. Blocked. Continued if possible.
change of blogskin
16 years ago
I felt that your 55 Fiction try was not bad, speaking of the plot and all, but I felt that the ending of it was rather weak. Perhaps you could make it more shocking with less specific revelations?
ReplyDeleteIf only everyone could keep quiet, my shouts would then be heard. Never thought I would end up this way. Under crushing debris.
Or something similar.
Keep up the tries.